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I'm The Closest To The Sun

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the sun came up to me
with its honeycomb core.

it was beyond my dreams!

it was more than one eye can gleam.

the sun moved like a hummingbird,
to and fro and it even hovered.

i felt a feeling, like (love),
but i didn't want to rush it,

for the sun kept my red-heart beating
and it even kept it blushing.

my heart went from shipwrecked
to lovesick.

my bones felt weighed down & my flesh
felt dead allover me.

it was such beauty and vanity;
for my brain won't even be on
long enough for it to even bereave me.

but anyway:
the sun came up to me
with its honeycomb core,

it allowed me to taste
its light with my eyes
and its gauze of light
with my hands.

it tasted like liquid
gold, the mix between
honey an wine and it
felt like sand


                                                                           April 15, 2014            


 
"He said the sun came up last night, he said it sang to him." - Close Encounters Of The 3rd Kind
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YOKOKY's avatar
sun....light...energy- make me feel the color- outstandin splendid poem :)